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Lmfao some crazy Slim Shady shit right here
What girl wuz ya dissing - shit funny though
Ight your vocab could have been used a lil better and more appropriately but overall good piece you stayed on topic very well and ur imagery was hilarious dope drop homie
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bitches is bitches like i said fam. Thought this was an alright piece, not superrap shit but it was a cool breeze joint. liked the way u played the concept bitches aint shit but hoes and tricks, i better stop for my shorttie walk by lol
holla at ya boy on my OMs and keep droppin that dope like clumsy fiends
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Returnin The Favor
Nice title feelin it
Creative with the title lol but anywayz yea the piece was kool i think the beginnin started off nice but the flow seemed stressed, not stretched cuz it flowed nicely just didnt feel right........ but yea openin wuz still good though
Example
and if you really wanna leave me 4 the next....chow
cuz all u do is bitch thats y I'm fucking with my x now.
belive me I tried to make this work I tried so much.
saying we coould make it damn I guess I lied too much.
after I fucked you yeh I really thought we would fit.
I am a lil stuck on u..only cuz u could suck a good dick.
All that flowed well but. it seemed stressed like it shoulda been worded different - ya feel me
But the rest flowed nicely and it was actually funny - good shit here man the endin was the best part of it all -- and whats makes it more humerous is the endin "Happy Valentines Day" lmfao
Good shit