Crew Battle: Laureate (I.J.L.) vs. Baron P. Mortuus (T.N.L.) - Topical/Poetry

Yup Bump^

Like some of the others said before. Laur def. took this one, because he kept my interest from the beginnin to the end. Your imagery was great. The whole storyline kept on throughout the verse. Vocab was good, Great flow to it.

Bar-you didn't do bad man. I actually didn't know you was this good at topical. Your flow was just off in some places the overall story wasn't as good as Laur's. I thought your vocabulary in this was good.


Overall bar came descent, laur just overtook him in many different areas.

v.laur