Searching for Home

First off let me start by saying I enjoyed your piece man..........imagery wise you made the emotional part of this piece really good.....searching for home played as a good tittle to name this.The Rhyme scheme and the wording seemed to also create some enjoyment in this piece other words well worded no real concerns in this area at all .You grabbed my attention throughout this by not causing me to say wtf is he was talking about,wordz came off my lips very fluid as I was reading no lie.. Overall your choice of words and decisions of placement seemed almost flawless.You kept me into what you were writing and also opened my mind up cause at first the topic had me thinking this just was another drop from someone but it was not just some bullshit it was creative and overall good.........Stay up and keep dropin hot shit and I will with out hesitation leave feed...........as long as you do the same :2thumb: .

Wordz.

lol sorry at me not seeing this sooner. im used to clicking on links to return the favor, but this time I actually had to look =/

lol.. Anways.

The piece itself was great. You have a different style than everyone else. Well, its in a way, similar to Baron Mynd's style. Uh, it is very, fluent? I don't know how to describe it, but it flows very well, and you have very few choppy parts in there. I think I had two parts where the flow was a tad bit off. The multies and intervals were insanely well done. I liked how it was kind of like poetry, and then again, it still has a scheme to it. But now to the piece itself other than your writing habbits.. lol. The piece was pretty good, for you it was average I think, but then again your on a different level from others. The discriptiveness of the parts really painted an image in my mind, it was kind of scary. Yeah, no doubt you are one hell of a writer. Sorry I couldn't leave feed sooner. And if this isn't the best of feed I'm sorry I'm destracted from being sore as a motherfucker. So yeah.. good job though, keep writing. I expect you to do good as fuck in SS.. if you don't I will be disappointed.

Thanks for the feed.