Floating Rivers

thanks appreciate the feed...

This was ann overall dope piece, the topic was pretty uniqu and original and I like how you took that creative approaah towards it, aalthough I felt as th story went on you kind've strayed away from the topic, as if you wer just rambeling, buut it was some good rambeling though lol, it kpt me interested, I guess you were going for that smooth laid bak yet very emotional type piece, becausyour imagery just wasn't really thatoutstandingor up to par with the rest of your piece, your voccabulary was pretty damn good through out thiis picce you stayed faithful to the title for atleast the majoruiy of this piece and considering your excesive meta's this was a pretty ccomplex piece, I always enjoy your piece because it's almost a gaurentee pleasure everytime.

Plese leave Quality feed on thhis link fam

Yup the metas were very good right here.Really suprises me in a way.I remember you used to just meh at everything now you are blowing us all away.You still have a long way to go but you are rapidly walking up the right path.Imagery and emotion was just so strong here and in a way grasped more than your other pieces.You seem to like to write the emotional pieces and you do a very good job in displaying your feelings.Wll done on this

thanks man.