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Re: Sweet Nothings
Very... odd... from you. Anyways. It's so vague, unclear what you're saying, I suppose you were just writing just to write... I mean... the title is Sweet Nothings, so, I suppose it connects. It's pretty cool, I mean, I read all the way through and never skipped a beat, you were flowing pretty well, there. I just didn't see much of the usual "you" in this piece, but, that's okay, I like to see people giving off a different vibe, it's cool. You were definitely a little bit out there on this one, man, maybe you were drunk or something, LoL, it's still pretty cool, but there's not a lot of weight to it, if you get me. Anyways, peace. Check my latest if u get time it's on the front page.
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Re: Sweet Nothings
Baron....this was pretty much like a sort of freewrite from you...though you pulled off the short line thing with the perfect flow...but the content in this piece seem'd bland....like it was just ongoing...but then again the topic was sweet nothings so you kinda played on that..to a certain extent..all in all this was still a great drop though...just not the usual Baron....