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this is an audio piece...im not puttin it on tha site until its done..it still has to be edited and what not.....but this piece actually strays away from how my pieces are normaly....i usualy incorporate more complexity...more multis and wordplay..this was more of a simple piece to me....very scerene yet real.......my life as of right now...broke down very simply...i like this piece of mine...but alot of cats dont obviously its been slept on since i dropped it..either way..thanks...up.....
It feels like tha worlds weight is crashin down
i sit in bliss and listen to that everlastin sound
I dont understand why you would be sitting in bliss if your world is crashing down?
To be honest with you, you rhymed just to rhyme. I dont think you really put much thought into what it is you wanted to say. This was just like a keystyle because there was really no point to it. Just random thoughts thrown together with alot of un-necessary words.
it actually had a story to it..i put thought into it.....once i see the worlds weight crashin down...all i can do is sit in bliss and listen to that everlastin sound...no need worryin about whats inevitable....it had a story..it al worked together.....i personaly dont like having to explain my pieces..but you should probably read it again....its not really abstract at all...shouldnt be too hard to grasp....its really a recollection of whats been going on in my life for tha past year......my ups and downs..my kid growin up.....my girl..how all these events have tied together and effected my life in different ways...it makes sense..if not..you should read it again...what i mean by tha worlds weight crashin down...is stress......tha stress im carrying.....amongst other things...im not gonna explain it all..if you didnt get it...all i can tell ya to do is read it again...~1~