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this was a deep cut write, I like the whole feel, how the character in the write is hideing under this false image and is trying so hard to hold this beast back from ripping through his vessel and causeing chaos lol Cool shit liked it a lot, I like your style, good vocab,good flow,good rhymes,all together the shit was like a 7/10
YEah... thanks.
This piece was very well written...the flow of it was consistant throuhout...I just did a similar piece to this...but you had a better take on the topic...and really played the emotion of it to the fullest...there weren't really any flaws to this seeing that the wording and vocab came together pretty well...overall this was a very good read...dopeness displayed....keep it up.....and RTF...plz...
-A Charm-
Thanks forum. Just hit up your piece too.
thought this was pretty dope
bumped it on rnr
and i'll bump it here
evolving...!
Good looks Fgee
Ok.........
Anymore??
Last up before the OM graveyard
Excellent piece. The rhyming was awesome as well as the structure so it flowed well. It was easy to understand for me, but i can tell it's complex and creative. The concept was cool and i liked the ending's imagery and how it all fell into place.
This piece was dope, man. Very nice work. The flow was nice and smooth. Towards the middle you dropped off. It ended up catching back on track again. People who normally use so many multi's fall off once in awhile... You didnt though.. Damn, dude. This would make a incredible audio, too. Maybe you should work on that next... I mean, if you have a mic. Anyhow.... I really enjoyed reading this. Emotion was to the Max. Your very talented.. Keep doin' ya thang, man. I'll keep an eye out for more of your shit. -one-