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great piece.
What a theme for this as well, at first i seen like all the names and was like man one of these is gonna ruin the piece for sure but after reading it i was totally amazed, great emotion and the wordplay and set up gave the piece a great image. nice flow as well everyone stuck to the theme. well worded and set up to perfection,.
Mad props to all those involved in this piece
-perfection-
Thanks.
aynone dare break this baby down?
ill drop feed on everyone elses verses... in a bit haha.
Yup systems been taken back a couple.
yup i did a piece thats just floating into nowhere
Next time do leave comments thanks.
it was me homie orry iwas still logged in on that account because of the mad hacker
Thats some twisted and disturbing ish. Nevertheless you all fit together really well and it seemed as though some of it was actually written together. Description was the strongest aspect in my opinion. You all brought out the pshcotic element effectively in each line. flow was on point but not flawless in any verse. It was good to see all the different styles mix to form that one story.
lol, seemed like one of the old school wutang joints where everyone just hop on the track for a there side of a story... the seperate structures and styles gave this om a nice collabs look. i thought the whole idea behind this om was dark and brutal, barons verse did a good job of gettin me hooked,a little bit of every style, the emotion was insane-like. the second verse was straight, picked up alot of nice consistency at the end. the 3rd verse was the most descriptive with an unusual rhyme skeme. probably the nicest imagery. the 4th verse had a devious touch to it, like he concidered a captured woman a prized posession. the 5th verse had too many selfanswered questions for a maniac committing how he looked at the crimes from the other verses, still a coo drop, the last verse i could tell was malices.. lol ,some also nice descriptive words, more describing the killing. the flow was on point..
nice collab guys.
thanks for the feed...upage//
come on and raise up
upage!..........................
to the top....I think that this deserves a nomination for collab of the month
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