horrible...that is all~1~
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horrible...that is all~1~
Ok Mr big shot on a forum, you will never get a career in this, did you know that? Not even a writing career, your actin like you know whats up on a forum is ridiculous, I should of done a parody on you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Licorice
lol @ this
........some just take this too seriously :2thumb:
Thank you licorice, for the fact you joined in with something you had nothing to do with, replied to my response instead of replying to the piece, & fucking set in concrete the facts I stated in my earlier post of maturity & wit,
Im not taking sides here, for all I have to gain is bad manners, Im just looking out for RB against certain dicks who havent got anything better to do that leave dumb responses to something they haven't even read, or flaming something in an idiotic manner rather than trying to help the writer, isn't that what Open Mic is for?
My opinion, you should all be banned or made to leave real feed on other pieces before you can post a new thread here again. I got so wrapped up in this I didn't even leave feed,
Tebo, this wasn't original man, I've seen this numerous times before but you couldn't of been going for originality. It just seems like something you sing along to with your buddies, making up your own words, its comical, but not funny. I see the joke, but its not to my taste if you will.These topics are really hard to gain anything from, & I see you were just having fun so there isn't really anything I can say about this that can help you as a writer, I'll look to your new piece man.
i have no criticism about his writing..cause i havent seen any so far.......this piece was idiotic..i read it...and i still think its idiotic.....i gave no advice because im sure this asnt a serious piece therefor no criticism is due...it was an idiotic piece..and thats that..when i read something you put effort into and are makin on a serious tip..then youll get my full and honest constructive criticism...until then..this was idiotic.~1~
I personally loved it as Jov Lo i give this a 10/10
Than why the fuck post that bullshit?
I cant let this go, Bounce needs to sort this forum out again, fucking 4lines max reply. So you thought it was BS, so did people before you in the excact same fashion, you just want to say you fucking posted & ha ve the post number go up one, Last post here,
But dont you see that no respectable heads posted here, just shows how far above bullshit like this they are.
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Originally Posted by Issue
i replied a feed,.... sounded similar as that ^
......only more direct and brief :whacky:
oh you fucking fag, go eat a dick. Im done.
relax :alc:
I appologize Issue & Licorice for even posting this & causeing ''drama''. I did not think people would take it as a serious offense to Justin Timberlake, I figured people would see this as a truely comical peice. Look at his lyrics to begin with, there so basic, of course mine were basic. This peice isn't meant to be great it was meant to make people laugh. It failed, I wish this would just get closed.
& BTW Issue, I know I posted some BS responses & stuff, but you have made me stop doing that, so you have influenced 1 person atleast lol.
If you don't think this is funny, just say that please for now on, or maybe close this... It's not caused anything good, but just flames. I appologize...
It doesnt even sync with the original song.. the lines werent clever. no thought put into this at all... i understanding your trying to be original so your probobly taking any negative feedback like "im not tryin to do a standard open mic, im trynna do a funny piece thats original" well it wasnt either.