Go read my OM, Feebs...
Thanks!
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Go read my OM, Feebs...
Thanks!
Feebs... i know one big word... does this count... refridgerator???
get your fucking links dammit
lol, dude, you're allowed to close it if you want. I'm not stopping you. But I will get my links. I'm gonna hit up all the pieces to those who replied in here tomorrow. I have a headache or I'd do it now
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complex rhyme skeme, the wording was done in a way that made sence of how you see this problem. an industry in corruption basically... i liked the complexity of your point of view. the flow was at a perfect pace in the beggining and slightly toned down then picked back up here-
Infiltrated by stereotype - but supported by those it degrades
an instant solution for this institution? it should be opposed & betrayed
i thought the vocab was fine. not understandin is one thing, but not putting any effort into finding what a word means is pure lazyness and retardation i've seen from some of the feed.
ha, no I was just being a dick. I give leeway to AI.. because I can. but yeah, try and get those in by the end of the day or I'll have to close it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
definatly was a short piece alot of decent control of your wording
easy to read simple structure flow was direct enjoyed this piece .
elevatin the key this game keep it man .
the jews are in control
yo son dis shiit hott best i seen lately nikkas fell off on here but u still up there peace