Werd vs Licorice

Real talk this battle could've deffinently been better both came soft on the personals they just weren't hitting and the punches were either meh or ok, but like I said befor I seen better from both, werd you just dropped na mean idk if you though this was gonna be a easy whoring, but you just dropped to simple and not enough originality and creativity, but what lost you this battle was you consistancy I felt you'll drop an ok bar then the next 2 will be wack then afterb that the other 1 will be decent it just wasn't enough to pll this one off.
v/lic - rtf on battle with bell

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Licorice
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heard werd on a loosin streak ,wernt u that wack constant queer kid?
Namechange that starts wit W still wont help you come near it
Um... so-so
also Heard u loosin it Having troubles with? Sorry to pop your bubble kid
But even your name knows where u heading , VV < only it even doubles it
This was pretty decent
BX native A vet? Comes to Necks the only thing u “pro........teck
talk is cheap, specially for this kid thats y he still be dropin from the projects
Sort of stretched, weak punch anyways
werd w/ jabs that make us fall........N laugh our ass off but that’s all
now watch me align werds with L’s so well like masters in scrable
Did not rhyme, decent concept though
please son lets stop the babble , i done split shit and get won!
and yea gotta admit that word is good ........ to be writing my shit on
This was a nice closer, even thought 'get' and 'shit' don't really rhyme

Overall, this verse had good and bad points. A lot of your bars needed re-wording to make it easier to understand and/or hit harder. I liked the closer, it was a good use of wit/nameplay. And the concept of your scrabble line was pretty good too. 5.5/10

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Werd
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Hit u with so many punches, kid'll be left lookin retared
Ur trash, u dont have any good lines on ur disposal, ur style's garbage
The 2nd line just seemed sort of repetitive. Kind of weak...
You ain't ready to step, you'll get stomped by many
If u plan to head me, I'll knock ur teeth out cuz u shouldn't use any
Plan to head you??? This concept was pretty blah.
Ur new but ur old news, should run when u feel the force fool
Wont feel remorse when I split ur personality, as if ur parents divorced dude
How would a divorce split his personality? This was soft...
Dummy, its pretty clear that u lost bitch plus theres no doubt
That Licorice is wack, even little kids are equipped to chew u up & spit u out
This was a decnt line, just a little bit of rewording could've made it hit harder
Quit text till u get better cuz u might get lucky
I'd fight u on ur own turf but park benches doesn't suit me
Weak way to finish off, kind of basic

Overall, this verse didn't really seem too god imho. The only good bar you had was the 'spit u out' line. Everything else was just sort of basic, or weak. 3.5/10. Work on developing new concepts, then spend more time reowrding your bars.

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VOTE: Licorice
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lol noobs

lol @ swaying , go battle coop if he such a noob
i wud like to see the outcome XD

blah stfu, ur verse was sooo played

idc dq me if u want to, its not like there any decent heads in this forum that knows whats played or not.

fuck you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=323002
^hit it or die

heard werd on a loosin streak ,wernt u that wack constant queer kid?
Namechange that starts wit W still wont help you come near it
blah set up
also Heard u loosin it Having troubles with? Sorry to pop your bubble kid
But even your name knows where u heading , VV < only it even doubles it
it was goin well then the last few words fucked u up
BX native A vet? Comes to Necks the only thing u “pro........teck
talk is cheap, specially for this kid thats y he still be dropin from the projects
basic...n bad wording, u stretched it 2 much
werd w/ jabs that make us fall........N laugh our ass off but that’s all
now watch me align werds with L’s so well like masters in scrable
align = played now
please son lets stop the babble , i done split shit and get won!
and yea gotta admit that word is good ........ to be writing my shit on
best

vs

Hit u with so many punches, kid'll be left lookin retared
Ur trash, u dont have any good lines on ur disposal, ur style's garbage
garbage, trash, anything of that sort = played now
You ain't ready to step, you'll get stomped by many
If u plan to head me, I'll knock ur teeth out cuz u shouldn't use any
nah
Ur new but ur old news, should run when u feel the force fool
Wont feel remorse when I split ur personality, as if ur parents divorced dude
ok
Dummy, its pretty clear that u lost bitch plus theres no doubt
That Licorice is wack, even little kids are equipped to chew u up & spit u out
meh nameplay, its probably been used on him be4
Quit text till u get better cuz u might get lucky
I'd fight u on ur own turf but park benches doesn't suit me
nah

v/Lic
although he stretched the fuck outta his verse, and ruined most of his punches due to bad set ups and played shit he took it for at least having a decent sense of what he was doing, Werd has battled better than this shit so when i look at this verse he dropped i'm like blah all over, nothing was good...i've never read Lic's shit before and it was a lil decent, and his closer was better than Werd's entire shit but both had alot of played punches and blah concepts all in all, RTF