In The Middle of the Night

this was a nice read it was a nice grasp of a little disgrunted confrontation with pain man.. nice storyline and a well put perspective with a nice adequate and feel of emotin on the topic itself with its own frame to not go out of proportion y aknow... it was a good read though i think you should structure yourslef a bit more and athe vocab use it more to a advantage cus some areas you seemed like or it seemed like it was kinda wondered about ya know..like it should have been placed there so just work a bit more of hsi tlike that and you got yourself a more improved writer your improving man but slowly but keep it up!

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