Antonio Banderas vs. Exempt

I disagree with these votes. Hm. I think i liked Exempts better. Althought both were merely weak, exempt showed more in his, by far.

Exempt- You opened fairly decent. You stayed consistant through most of your verse, and if you lacked off it wasnt by much. Your punches were that strong but you did indeed throw more. That indeed grabbed you the W in my eyes.

Ant- Your drop to me was plain and basic. You tried to force wordplay a little too much, actually most of ur lines were indeed forced. I dont like reading forced shit, because in turn it doesnt flow, or even sound good. Your punches were ok...But you could hit much harder then what your doing.
v/Exempt

Hit up battles in my sig plz.

not mad my first battle sence LLL a couple seasons ago... Rusty it happens Uppppi #1

Uppin #5 for votes......

Check out what a FL battle is supposed to look like:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322764

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Exempt
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Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
decent
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
wasn't feelin this punch
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
tried to be creative, yet, still pretty weak
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
ehh.. so-so
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
weak punch, i dont know if this concept was played, seems like it would be tho

Overall, this did seem like a 'shakin the rust off' type of verse. Saw some potential, yet most of these bars were weak. The opener was good, and... that was about it IMHO. What's up with the 4 bars, instead of 5???? 4/10

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Antonio Banderas
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lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
so-so nameplay
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
uh... hmm... nah
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable
this was okay
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
nice multi, i liked this punch
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
another good multi, and nice concept

Overall, this verse started off pretty weak, but your last two bars really did it for me. They flowed nice, rhymed nice, and hit pretty good. If only all 5 of your bars had those qualities, this would've been an even more convincing KO. Above average verse... 5.5/10

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VOTE: Antonio Banderas
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none came that hard

lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution

vs

Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it

...good battle but i think Antonio had a better verse overall

V/Antonio

Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
lame/played and it's a "burry you" bullshit punch
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
no ..lame
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
ehh, too simple ..not hard
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
ok, picture wordplay is a bit dated though
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
no ..you had a burry joke already ..now you wanna dig it up? fuck that

vs

lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
ehh, nah, could've been better.
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
ok at best, nothing more
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable
lol, mehhhh ...too simple
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
heh, ok
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
could've been a doper punch ..


exempt did horribly, while AB came with a few decent CONCEPTS. your wording is still meh, but i guess that comes with being gone for so long. get back into shit, you'll start getting better again ..


v/ Antonio