Re: We don't need you (all alone)
nice emotional opening bars. i like starting verses with outbursts if i can
it got a bit similar to emenems usual rants with the wif/girlfriend beef thing.but w/e shit happens to us allso em didnt originate that ish just got big on it somehow.
kim and all
nice flow and technical abilities displayed as well......... i see you be working hard on the flow and emotion element.....,,,,,,,,,,good coz i can get wit it f'sho...........
good ish
are you familiar with bobby digital of wutang clan............he had a crazy tune when he and a bitch are dissing eachother to death...sic......
your verse ended a bit abruptly i reckon..worked well as a shhort joint still
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Re: We don't need you (all alone)
Re: We don't need you (all alone)
Emotional no doubt...soem parts were aightish with technics but overall i believe it was the emotion which carried this piece. Not enojyable as knowing it has happened to you. Something which shouldn't happen in natural order but does. I beleive that you've done a pretty good thing by using writing as your output of emotions. Stay up na mean.