thanks; I hit those favors.
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thanks; I hit those favors.
yup I liked this peice fo' shizzle lol. but for real, it was doep as hell, and I can see you a reaping the benfits of AI already. You have become an even better writer, and if you keep this up, you'll be untouchable within a very short time lol. I liked the imagery of this peice, it was really strong, and the poetic feel made it that little bit more enticing to me, as I love poetry. The story was very good, and the twist at the end was very clever and surprising to see. I really got into this peice, I was dragged in, and forced to read, from start to finish, not once did you fall off, and not once was I even slightly bored. Nice shit dude, keep at it. Props.
it waz aight
but not dat good no dr