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Meh battle
the topic is really played.............but besides that luna I think your structure was on point the wording was alright you weren't that creative the image was meh and I don't think you ended ur verse in the right way........next time juss get a lil creative..
cross ur verse wasn't that good ur structure was decent but besides that nothing else you could've worded things better you weren't really creative neither and you didn't really have image.......no hate but luna takes this one
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Luna-I liked ur piece...I was able to follow the concept of it to a certain degree..however, the topic choice didn't really grasp me..I do have to admit that your word usage was very nice..structure kind of made the read a bit drawn out...
CrosT-I liked ur piece as well..I think Luna had a slight bit of better word usage than you, but ur wording was to the point and made ur piece more easy to follow...I was able to have more imagery from ur piece than Luna's, so thats why my vote lies w/ u...
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