Some Thoughts of Mine.

Gotta write the stories or all the dumb kids will say they don't think I was creative enough because they've "heard it all before." It's all about the votes. Gotta conform to the public, it sucks but... whatever. Half the time I write stuff that I think is a really great point, noone even catches it, and then some bullshit someone else writes that says something to the tune of ,
"And the willowing wasps of wilted basil for Heavenly thoughts, diminished plots of my energy makes the clouds rain away in blots..."

and they think that's beautiful. When, in fact, that is terrible, terrible bullshit that barely means a goddamn thing, but what do I know. Anyways, if more people like you were in SS voting I'd write more to the heart because I know other intelligent people would see the effort put into the writing of every line flow and meter style and actually vote for that rather than a mess of garbage that looks cool... but I complain about that all the time. No changing people. I know what I write and I know what they write, it's all interpretation.

You're a leader or a follower? Don't conform, just redefine.

Beautiful piece my friend. Only other piece I've read from you was in SS and you stole my vote in that one even though you lost the battle. this piece was dope as hell though. smooth flow from beginning to end, even with the switch of schemes. content in this is clean-cut and real. quite moving actually, im sure we've all had a taste of this. great description of how life feels some times, emotion was raw. i'll be sure to write with my all if i come face to face with you in SS, i do too look forward to that though. thanks for the feed on my piece. 5/10 keep writing! joking...lol.

peACE

ps. don't know if you're in a crew but PB would love to have ya!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=248

no need to tryout if you accept.

yeah the emotion was good on this piece.flo was coo... not much to feed on information - wise. so could of been a lot more graphical thus visualy entertaining
was good in many ways tho.and had a hard feel to it. if maybe melancholic.
such is the time of year for this sort of thing....
but all in all was a good ole drop

check out my new piece thats on the board somewhere.