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Flowed evenly inbetween the both of you...Good vocab, nice and short story but even though it was short, it still delievered a good read...Idk what else to say about the piece tho...Good imagery, everything was on point basically...good job by both you of guys
This had some potential to be really good. As you know it was a little short. But i think from what was there it was pretty good. You both meshed well. It was well wored and flowed pretty nicely.
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short yet sweet in here you own vocabulary and point of interest stood out and pointed out nicely what your direction was and your own motivation was in this piece was just a nice collab...both meshed well together and both complimented on each other ya know...the contetn was iight and the emotino waswell was on point...nice drop here guys keep it up.
sorry for short feed.
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