The Story of Abraham: and the man who holds him

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Originally Posted by B.I.G. Nash

but this isn't a text battle ..it's a topical ..don't read them in punch form, read it as poetry and rhythmatic shit rather than bullshit ..

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i understand the difference man, i write better topicals then u... and battle verses but i lose... so that means im wrong but whatever i still do. and im just writing to you. right. not haten on ur verse but takin about sumthing u wrote...


and really, fuck poetry... cuz i kno poetry is alot different then what you do.
not always cuz you force rhymes that syllabally and rhymicly align like the penny line when you used crude muck... it still worked nice like i said but it doesnt flow correct. theres a correct flow, i dont care who says different there is. but ur verse was good. it takes alot to read topicals for me cuz alot drag the fuck on, but ive been known u nash an ill always lookout 4 a flaw or 2 if i can find 1. b ez.

rofl @ i write better topicals than you ..wtf, get outt'a here.

people talkin shit...hahaha

i think it would be a good battle between yall