Re: Walking Before God, In The Devils Footsteps
nice tile./my kinda ish f;sho...
flow=......nice to me............
content=...... nice.
vocab=.nice f'sho.
structure = same as above.....ha
not to drone pn on this is sum nice ish...<1
rhymes dropped off of shape a coupkle of times and didtn rhyme too well in my lingo you know lo..but all in all ish was crafted well andf had plenty of poeticc quality about it that i liked and was entetrtained by.....1q<
just keep elevating on the lingo/vocab.thus elevating on the rhyme capacirty and leading to a never ending rhyme volocity......... high level materail don dadda buisiness senn
pz1
vor for ever
Re: Walking Before God, In The Devils Footsteps
i don't think i've ever been more confused before in my life lmao but it sounded good no doubt work on vocab and all that no prob
Re: Walking Before God, In The Devils Footsteps
Re: Walking Before God, In The Devils Footsteps