In The Place You Call Home

Lmao. Thanks again I guess. Uppin' for *Cough*better*Cough*feed. Will RTF once again. (If adequate feed is left...)

Nice, very nice. Topic was nicely brought out. Although in some parts simple, the word choice was excellent. The bigger words arent always the better choice. Dope Drop man...

RTF on my piece ... Untitled... im still thinking of a name... one love

Thanks. I'll get to it as soon as I have a chance. Uppin'.

Uppin'.

This was a cool piece actually. I see so much of that typical hood/ganster shit, that when I find the same concepts worked into something much more creative it's just so refreshing. Although, this piece did have its faults. Specifically with word choice and diction. It felt like a lot of times you through away content for meter, in a strive to maintain that 2 syllable multie scheme throughout the piece. Next time, try using more than one mutlie string, that way you wont have to resort to settling for words that kiiiind of mean what you'd like, but don't truly fit. Overall, decent piece, could use a bit of touching up though.

If you could,
This is George.

Appreciated. I hit your link. Uppin'.

This piece is was illy...point blank
. You had a nice visual, and nice ryhme skeme. nice use of words also . it made the flow so creative. All on point. the topic was common, bu t the piece was enjoyable
keep droping science