Flashback.

the flow was like a braid, a bunch of different rhyme skemes and multis that fix into each other, which i thought was really clever. the vocabulary was phenominal, very very extensive. the imagery about a mans not-so-easy life, but being glad hes alive, plot was good. im not even going to bug about the structure because its not how nice it looks, its how nice it is. sure there were great lines in this verse, but one stood out in perfect insight, highlighting the basic conception of this piece.

He’s surrounded with his head pounding & heart racing.
Facing memories he thought he lost…
but never stopped chasing.

that bit is what made my thoughts start going. real nice piece. i hope to get some feed from an om writer like u in return...

oo shit this poem was mad good!! i liked it alot good shit man and keep the pieces comin

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His memory came to play.
It paved a way thru the haze & shade.
Thru the tricks & delays of his mind’s intricate maze

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Put that together nice .

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He’s surrounded with his head pounding & heart racing.
Facing memories he thought he lost…
but never stopped chasing.

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Altogether the drop was on point, you white, blk? .
Doesn't matter, the knowledge you have seems like it goes far. Keep em comin
Wanna see the next one.

This was a brilliant piece, astonishing at how it is so unique, I see it differently from all the other pieces in this section, very well done.

You're flow was smooth, and at times seemed perfectly timed. Imagery was spot on, I could really see everything you were saying. Emotion was there. And multies were great too :)

Excellent job dude, Kudos.

Congratulations on this successful piece, looking forward to your future scripts.

Please RTF if possible :)