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I really liked this...though some lines seemed a little awkward but overall it was decent...good concept and vocabulary and originality...though I would have liked to see it longer...I felt that it has great potential to be longer than what it is,....but overall I really liked it...keep it up :)
I like this one as well..the topic was intriguing and I like the vocab u used to bring imagery 2 it..I see u r truly elevating w/ da topics..it was a little shorter than what I've seen before from you, but the concept overall was real decent..stay up..HM..
If so don't plug in objects just speed up the process
and the profits in my will-will go to the projects
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forum like i said in the topical this seemed kind of half assed fam. ive seen so much bettter from u. u set the bar high and this piece really just doesnt do it fam. ur vocab and emotion werent really there. at sum points u were off topic and at others u were on. overall this pieces isnt up2 par wid ur other OMs to me fam. just keep elevatin fam aight
this is some good shit keep spittin
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