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nicee
us bandits managed to vanish
f'sho ^
blue collar
shirt tucked
f'sho...
kiss the knife
engulfed in opaque
nicee
souls shall gleam and......
f'sho
nice poetry in this shit f'sho.flow was nice......emotion was There.
good / dope piece.was mos def entertaining AND WROTE IN a tite manner
pz
check this pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=315291
thankks red..up
Nice solid drop, from the both of you.. you both came hard on, I was feeling It from both of you. Your punches & flow came on top, vocab was good, multies were there, and the concept is tight, overall you both came nice.
Engulfed in opaque thoughts embraced by optimism's grasp,
cast and passed but all remains virtually somber. A wonder
to behold- one man's life is another man's death, prerendered
by bloody murmurs with tunes of bass clef.
^ dope shit right there..
keep doing you, and return the favor.
last up....
the vocab in this piece was nice n i liked the flow ..it gave me a good visual....all im sayin is keep up
uppin for feed
all in all was dope ass imagery and some smooth metaphors to boot......... structure was decent.........
rhymes was illest in the ist verse ya nah mean coz was more complex but not too complex so was coo...... 2nd verse rhymes ran a bit too basic as in the end rhymes.....
and wording of the 2nd verse could of been elevated somewhat////////
3rd verse seem like a big closing statement or something. tho formated nice diddnt seem to have real flow to it so i must admit i diddnt get into it too much as i did the 1st 2 verses..... guess it still had poetic qualities within.but i'm here for the rap still ya nah mean
nice collab tho..keep doing yo thang
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