^^thanks
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^^thanks
This was a good collab, very good work guys.
First of all I must say, that the flow was excellent, it was smooth and easy to follow, you brang great imagery to the table also, and your vocabulary was also good too.
The picture you also put into this piece brang the piece into more of an emotional level too, which is a really nice attribute to this piece.
Overall, this was nice, keep up the great writing. :)
RTF on "Black Roses, Red Tears"
this was nice, ya multies was hitten. did yaw get the idea from the denzal washington movie. im just askin cause i aint sure what its about and thought what ya wrote had something to do with it. i liked how yaw set it up with the beginning and then u move on to And Then He Says..... u can imagine the person saying it when he wakes up. even though hes woke i picture him in a dark bedroom sitting up consinplating. dope fam.