OMFG.....cmon once more
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OMFG.....cmon once more
This was an excellent piece :) You had everything, congratulations on this successful collab.
First of all, I'd like to give you credit for your vocabulary, good job there. Your structure was well put together, and everything was placed in a sensible sequence. Also, your flow was brilliant, it made me want to read on, knowing that it was going to be steady, and I wouldnt have to look back and try to pick up the flow again, like in many other OM's on this forum.
Overall, this was a very good piece fam. :D Kudos to you both.
Peace and Cheers.
PS: RTF on my new OM :)
uppin....damnmit