Damn.....The flow was exceptional!! Both of the verses were completely easy to read and the imagery was great. The vocabulary used wasn't too complex which made it easier to understand.
Best lines of first verse:
"As I live, I am attracted to the evil in the shadows
I am magnetized towards the hate, sin is what I need
To succeed, to gloat and float as the rest drown in the shallow
The wicked dwells in my soul, expressed through my actions
In my thoughts and my words, the image of him is displayed
He influences me with his spite and detestful reactions
Forcing the light to fade as the globe is cast in shade"
Just well thought out....It all makes complete sense....
Best lines in 2nd verse.
"Newton’s laws still apply so I keep falling to shame
Trying to exit the game created by him who’s vain"
and
"Needles & insert them into the doll I spasm in sorrow
Pain affliction because of the D mans infliction
So seductive are the dark tendrils gripping in friction"
Great collab; Looking forward to more.
