Angel Of Dopenes vs. JFC

dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*

vs

is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer


meh... JFC what was that first bar.. that shit was weak man... honestly....
iv seen was better verses, you both are much capeable of doing better.. but JFC had a more....expressed verse and 1 or 2 okay punches...AOD you should have came harder i know you cann so V//JFC

up4.

i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
LOL, NICE
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
LOL, COOL
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
MEH
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
NOT TOO BAD
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
LOL, FUNNY WORDPLAY

vs

dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
NAH, HE MASTURBATES?...PFF
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
NO
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
MEH, BASIC
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
NO...STATEMENTISH
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
BETTER, OK CLOSER


OK, aod good opener, 2nd bar cool, then u fell of a bit but your last bar was witty, maybe not that harsh, but decent drop, your improving.
jfc, 1st punch was gay, 2nd forced, 3rd n 4th bars were way too simple, do not make stastements, try a lil wit, your closer was better tho, at least you thought a lil in that bar.

on the contrary to what smoka thought, this was kinda one sided vote aod more consistent

VOTE
AOD

i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
i didnt get this line....you know his name? yay?

is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer

.... its alright, you didn't transition well

i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill

dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**

Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me


sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft

know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
i didnt get this line....you know his name? yay?

is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer

.... its alright, you didn't transition well

i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you

i didnt understand what state you left him in...

you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look

ehhhhh

ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill

this has to be the best line out of this all..

V.S.

dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*

Dope!

he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**

good punch

Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me


sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope

lol pride killer right there

AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings

clipped them wings off!

u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft

sickest line out of the bunch

*now i posted twice and i acknowledge this cause that was my bad, but if i could vote, JFC got this locked down, but AOD, your shit was mild though. a lil work here and there would get you to actually fly*

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Coherent.

sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
lmao, nice

Vs.

is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
lol, this was alright

JFC-i liked all the personals you used, nice/decent punches throughout, solid flow and structure

AOD-you had 1 crew personal, no nameplay, you had some decent punches but i felt a couple of your bars were just statements, solid flow and structure

vote-JFC for an overall better verse, no hate

hit this up honestly

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i did have nameplay IDIOT. my opener. uppin.

i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck

all you said was, "i know your first name....just in" that's played, if you could've came up with something for his initials other than his actual name, then that'd be a different story, and i haven't polled yet anyway

know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
^ROFL.
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
^Lol. Good.
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
^Decent.
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
^Lol.

vs.

sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
^Lol.

Pretty one sided. JFC, you had some iight punches but they just didn't hit as hard. Your getting better though so don't worry about it man. This was a pretty good battle. Both of you are levating I can see. But AOD had the better verse out of this battle so....

\\//AOD

^^^WTF nigga hes in yo crew? we allowed 2 have crew votes?

i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
lol decent
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
meh...decent punch
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
meh
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
no
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
no
overall pretty decent verse. sum lines were better than others

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dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
meh decent
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
meh
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
ROFLMFAO *dead*
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
LMFAO nice punchline
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
lmfao nice crew play
overall good verse. u were more consistant during the end.

V//JFC for havin better punchlines and personals

so. you and coherent are both in 2 minutes of hate. uppin again.