thx yo uppin some more feed
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thx yo uppin some more feed
nice drop...had some good lines that really stood out...then some that just threw off the whole drop...had a basic strutre...which kinda got me reading but not really...flow was nice wasnt off to much....multies we're meh..lets just say you couldve done alot better....the topic was nice...you did it pretty creative...nice drop..hit up my new om As I...
Everything was good, aside from a (Very) minor imagery problem I think this is an excellent piece. Check this -http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313372
The Two, my new OM.
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it was nice son, have little more umph in your rhymes and vocab but it was great. yo, plus yor age, you very good. try to leave your remarks on my new post. its called "2day Will Lead In 2morrow. its on open mic
shiiiiiiiit, i'll vote for you to for rookie of year. lol
thx yo post the link here if i win lol thx again and i'll check out ya peice
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this was a great piece in mi mind pyro nice elevation and your rhyme scheme of 3 line AAA BBB CCC DDD<< that wasa style i used back in the day and i have yet to see people use it again except til now...which was a koo scheme ya know also...your emotion was nicely put and it was fire...it stayed on point with nice vocab and lyrical content...a basic flow with a real complexed multies and metaphors that detailed the image to a percise storyline which made it unique man...nice drop pyro big ups to you homie!.
RTF if so link in the sig Tears Shade red..
thx man and i'll hit up ur om uppin some more feed
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