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I seen this befor when vets underestimate the new guy and then get or almost get owned or w/e, looks you did an half assed job on this you had one good punh but the other were ok or meh and for the other kid dam your strutured was fucked and your flow was off and observe other battlers and look at what they did that you didn't.[*] this isn't nessisary we'll figure it out fams.
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awe dam um can ya please hit up this link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311910
im Constance
i see where people are saying they dont want explanations but the ones i didnt explain they completely missed too...
i didnt explain either of these punches... or do in-depth explanation of any of the others and no one gets it
Fuck look$, you’d only drill a girl being a dentist
and bring heat only off the set of Apprentice
get it, his looks arnt getting him girls, he could never drill a girl in the way someone want to, and hed only be hot being fired... by donald trump... from a well known tv show
that is not that complicated and deserves recognition instead of people saying the exact same thing people in front of them voted
If Look$ Could Kill… it’d only be his MC appearance
Find a new profession to pay your severance.
same with this punch... that i think dj alluded too.. its a well known colloquialism that pertains to his name and implies a different meaning that insults him- and severance is a type of check you get when your dismissed from a profession- again i didnt think it was neccesary to explain this cuz its not that complicated but seriously
i hate to have to do this but i am getting garbage feedback here- and if people think look$ took this battle i respect that- but they need to at least take the time to do a close reading - seeing as i would expect people to get these punches in an actual battle let alone text
^^ i see what ur sayin bro maybe it the wordin dat kills off the punch a lil bit trust me i get dat a lot so i try to improve on dat but cnt be bothered lol
ill make amends, and cut off ur life supply and now your dead end
cus der no wer ur gonna go with those raps its time to stop the pretend<---nah...flowed decent, but the punch was off.
to be honest i aint got time for you fam, but ill past this hour
and stomp on your face as i walk by the local clock tower<---the same....no real punch there fam
ur the type dats into incest sex, n ur moms dnt tire shes an exhaust fan
and your the type 2 cower, so u sholdnt take danger into account man<---meh
ill take ur ass 2 japan, den maybe u could c im treadin on a thin line
after i put your ass to the floor, and tread all over your weak spine<---not bad
its already defined, you was born a loser you dumb fuck
u got the worst delivery, dats y u should spit with a garbage truck<---iight, concept's kilt though
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Pasty smurfs shouldn’t battle, if you have doubts
Look$ in sad shape already – like he survived fall out.*<---meh...flow was str8 though
Your name and feedback both attest to your vanity,
Look$ more biased and misinformed than Sean Hannity.*<---iight
Ware preambles to scandal when opening your mandibles
I’ll cannibalize you and your verse like I’m Hannibal*<---no no no no...hannibal punches been done to death
Fuck look$, you’d only drill a girl being a dentist
and bring heat only off the set of Apprentice<---so-so
If Look$ Could Kill… it’d only be his MC appearance
Find a new profession to pay your severance.<---meh, didnt rhyme well n "Look$ Could Kill" punches have been done too much.
overall....
look$ - your 4th bar was decent, but the rest was a lil hurtin fam.
the punches need some workin on homie, you flowed well though.
you know me, no hatin involved, i just spit the truth.
danger - some of your concepts were mad fuckin old, but you still had a couple good lines. the 2nd n 4th bars were the best ones.your structure was real str8 too, i think you were underestimated on this one, and made off with the upset win.
i really think danger took this one, i think looks slept on em a lil cuz i seen better from him. unfortunately, i can only offer my opinion. the site guys stripped all my posts, so i'm just startin to get em back.
plz hit the joint in my siggy fellaz, both yall.
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ill take ur ass 2 japan, den maybe u could c im treadin on a thin line
after i put your ass to the floor, and tread all over your weak spine
*meh ok...
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Pasty smurfs shouldn’t battle, if you have doubts
Look$ in sad shape already – like he survived fall out
*haha ok
close but i'ma have to give it to lookz for better overall if dangerman had one more good line he would of got it but lookz i guess edged this one by a bit kk no hate juss elevate.
vote//lookz.
hit the link n i'll poll my vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312624
^^ thats a bit gay yo cus if the vote goes against u of course u aint gonna poll ur vote homie. just poll or dont post at all.
yo i'll poll truss me..i don't care about wins n losses..Quote:
Originally Posted by lOOk$
plus ur juss about to win this anyways..
n dont pm me if u ain't gonna rtf...
poll your vote or dont post at all thats wot i mean and dats the whole point
^thats my point..Quote:
Originally Posted by Kid New Era
hit it up or no poll..
i'll poll it i've been around long enuff to understand how this shit works
meh battle wasnt to crazy about both verse but i got looks winning this dangers punches were not even good they were like "your a hoe so ama tramp you" nothin really wowed me also the same goes for looks verse nothing wowed me either but he atleast had some ok lines
overall i vote for looks for having a ok verse weak battle guys elevate
ill take ur ass 2 japan, den maybe u could c im treadin on a thin line
after i put your ass to the floor, and tread all over your weak spine
Vrs
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to me danger your punches didnt hit mann you just didn't have the type of verse i thought you were gonnahave u lacked punches and you had mostly fillers mann just make sure your punches are more direct and connect
Vote lookz