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alright i almost have 100 posts so if you cant get this closed pm me in a day or so and i will poll my vote
the only thing true about your name, seriously your a constant nag
you went in b/s looking for a battle....n we were like who is this fag
[bleh- kinda weak personal]
just by getting in this battle you should consider yourself lucky
a vet? shit ur not even a joke.........watch me smoke this da-chi*(duchy)
[good effort but i didnt really think this hit very hard]
being 15 years old n a vet.........nigga you dont even have the time
^what the fuck happened here^...........nigga quit pasting my lines
[what? he pasted a blank line?- doesnt make sense]
what made you quit rb for so long, you think we'd forget your stench
i'll call you scarface............after i beat you with this lyrical wrench
[pretty weak]
this is the fast n the furious, you quick to drop after my fury
nobodies even looking at your rymes, might as well be blurry
[pretty weak]
ok personal efforts but the rest was weak concepts
famo listen,your not nice,especially with the shit you spittin
I seen ya writtens,you half assed it,considerin half of it was bitten
[ok]
I see you going through hard times,now you out on your paper chase
lifes an up hill battle for you,meaning theres little chance you'll elevate
[him being out on his paper chase is pretty ambigious like for welfare papers or what-kinda undeveloped personal but ok]
no-hate,you dropping is futile,because whoring you is fundamental
you gets no hoes,how you gone son me, when no ones fucking with you
[doesnt rhyme - played concept]
don't get sentimental,its just today In this battle luck isn't with you,
..........my words hittin you close to home,emotions I bid to you
Im throwing cry baby punches, the way they're ya rippin tissues
[a multi with two yous... i think this could use some rewording... emotions I bid to you...the last part of it is solid but the setup was terrible]
alright constance gets this but it was relatively close - both of you fell off a lot after your opening punches and need to work on consistency
aiight thanks uppin
I can't vote yet either but if this battle is still open when i can i'll vote for now i'll give feed back
The win goes 2 Constance
THis was a weak battle overall but constance had one good line on paperchases name. Paperchasese had personals but his 10 bars didn't hit hard enough
I mean 10 lines............................................. .................................................. ........................................
just for your info, i know it dont matter but i hate when peopl misinterpret my lines....
the cut n paste line meant that....
there was a blank line there, which means he cut the line out, not pasted a blank line
get it yup basically i called him a biter
ur not though constance it was just a battle, besides you beat me fair n square
yea i know uppin
Honestly I thought both verses were pretty weak...Constance, the ending of your last three lines ended with "you" so it didn't really rhyme....and Papper Chase, your verse rhymed and all, but it had some basic punches and overall it wasn't too good....but if I had to vote it would go to Chase kuz his had better punches in my opinion....But both of yall need to elevate.
v/Chase
This was a really weak battle here from both. I have to say none came off hard AT ALL. Both could have came alot more direct with alot harsher punche's but came off farely soft. Both have to come with fresher concept's & wording. Reading through both verse's to me it seemed Chase had he better verse. Both need to elevate.
V - Chase.
Blah.. I got mixed up with the name's. Constance was the person I voted for seeing as I didn't macth the verse's I got confused. I'll get it fixed though.Quote:
Originally Posted by Infamouz.
`Pz.
dis was a weak ass battle on both parts but this right here won the battle for me
famo listen,your not nice,especially with the shit you spittin
I seen ya writtens,you half assed it,considerin half of it was bitten
I see you going through hard times,now you out on your paper chase
lifes an up hill battle for you,meaning theres little chance you'll elevate
vrs
nothing
Vote constance
reason he actually had punches and shit well both or u guys did but his were direct
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I got Constance taking this battle, But in all honesty its not like you won it with the best piece ever. But you should try to shorten your concepts up a bit, lines are long yo, and your using misc. filler in there a good bit. Decent concepts tho enough for the win.
V. Constance