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ive read alot of ur shit and all of it is dope as fuck including this i really liked this one because whith a lot of peices i read i lose intrest and kinda skim this i kept reading fully interested i wouldnt have minded if it was four times longer great stuff the flow was nice really mellow i liked it the vocab from you as always was exellent and used in all the right places the rhyming was fairly simple but that didnt stop me from likeing the peice the topic it seemed relaxed but brought a message with it overall great job 9.5/10 keep it up
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First, thanks for the feedback on my verse. As a Bob Marley fan since four years of age, this really hit home and as such probably made me like it all the more despite any technical flaws... I have none to highlight, here, I really enjoyed this piece and I thought that you definintely came very strong with your rhyme scheme and wordplay. You told a wonderful story and stayed on point with your topic, and I think people that know little about Bob Marley have at least some tidbits to learn here and there from this piece.
Bravo, I really enjoyed this, it's not perfect or HOF or anything, but I did enjoy reading it and I think you executed it well. HoF from me takes some kind of awe-inspiring work, the rhymes done on this piece were just not inventive or clever to the point where I would consider this a 'cream of the crop" piece. Definitely, though, something that stands out amongst the OM doldrums...
Yup thanks lol.