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even though this piece was a lil basic I was still feeling it.You had a really strong emotion in this piece which really made it stand out.And also you had good use of multies and Imagry in this piece cuz when I read this piece its like I could picture what was going on in your head at the time.And for a love piece this was pretty good compared to what I have read but you need to get more complex and creative with the topic when you write.But overall this was a good piece to read and it amazed me.ust keep on writng and things will turn out better.Hope to see more form you soon.Keep up the good work.

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