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My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
^Okay.
Vs.
Nothing
This was not one sided but Regency came a bit played in his verse...both should read LLL battles and try and elevate to get a hold of what concept look like....Abd the punches here were weak aswell as the set ups so work on that too.
V/Chris
Hit this HONESTLY please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=5157950
My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
how will you snatch his soul over the internet, stupid threat
dude, my hands move so fast when i punch u'd think i got parkisans
Knock the salayva out ya mouth and watch u stiffin ^ like a dead carcuses
another threat
Punches hit so hard u cant hold ya tongue, i fucked ^ ya salavary glands
Unlike u I'm a "Heavy Hitta" whose real thoro, u should compliment my hands
ok
So stop the silliness man, your just the J in IJL, and that about it
We read your battle for entertainment, watchin u change ^ like scyts.
meh weak
N this herb meant to put Regent 4 his name, dumb ass kiss my tush
N I'm not a republican so tell ya girl to shave cuz I'wn beat around the Bush
lol
Overall this was a pretty weak verse, the first 4 lines were nothing but threats. You need to step up your consistancy. Try have a punch in every bar of your verse. Overall 6/10
vs.
Charles Darwin? Meh, get back on the Beagle* and stick to evolution
Your partys long deceased, so Im delivering an after lively retribution
lol
Your texting is great, hell lets say youre on a level all alone
But your^^ your key punches in the wrong spot, the pounds still on your phone
ok
Sucking up kid? Saying good battle, but still remember, looks can be deceiving
Part of the Fab 4? And we can call you straight
...Your still the only 1 that has hopes of believing
lol
You cant break no one in, your already the one in your box
I told him his love is ticking away and he needs flavor
..So he went out and bought clocks
lmao
Finishing strong, yo why even try, when the real one died at 73*
Posers need to be killed, and this ones overdue @ 100
....... .. ..but hes succumbed to me
nice
Overall this was a pretty good verse from you. Your getting better. Decent punches, good structure and flow. Wordplay could have been better though. Overall 7.5/10
V. Regency
My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
no
dude, my hands move so fast when i punch u'd think i got parkisans
Knock the salayva out ya mouth and watch u stiffin ^ like a dead carcuses
na
Punches hit so hard u cant hold ya tongue, i fucked ^ ya salavary glands
Unlike u I'm a "Heavy Hitta" whose real thoro, u should compliment my hands
meh ok
So stop the silliness man, your just the J in IJL, and that about it
We read your battle for entertainment, watchin u change ^ like scyts.
na
N this herb meant to put Regent 4 his name, dumb ass kiss my tush
N I'm not a republican so tell ya girl to shave cuz I'wn beat around the Bush
word it better, but ok concept
vs
Charles Darwin? Meh, get back on the Beagle* and stick to evolution
Your partys long deceased, so Im delivering an after lively retribution
ok
Your texting is great, hell lets say youre on a level all alone
But your^^ your key punches in the wrong spot, the pounds still on your phone
meh
Sucking up kid? Saying good battle, but still remember, looks can be deceiving
Part of the Fab 4? And we can call you straight
...Your still the only 1 that has hopes of believing
ok
You cant break no one in, your already the one in your box
I told him his love is ticking away and he needs flavor
..So he went out and bought clocks
ewwy
Finishing strong, yo why even try, when the real one died at 73*
Posers need to be killed, and this ones overdue @ 100
....... .. ..but hes succumbed to me
stetment
v/reg
he had the better overall vere with harder and more direct punche's. Um charles the threat's dont work, try flipping them into punche's so they have more affect. Regency all the ....... are not needed, they just get annoying. Dont use them stupid thing's. Anyway regency won with a better overall verse.
uppin.
dammmn this was a tight battle lots of word skeme and flow and punches but i give this to Charles Darwin...u droped hard man ....
Vote DQed you sorry fucking piece of flaccid dick.
-Fue
This was an aight battle, both dropped good and gave an entertaining read. Darwin you had some threats but i'm not gonna give this a net perspective cause battles are battles and should be looked like that. Regency you had used good punches but i've seen similar punch rhymes/styles in many previous battles and i reckon you should try coming up with more original concpets that would awe the reader and diss the opponent. That done, i reckon Darwin won this by a hair or more aptly put by one punch. Not much difference really so \/ Darwin.
Best bar from CD
My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
most of ur spit contained of shit that should of been reworded and some lines that need to use no self glosry u really like talking about ur self dont you
Best Bar from REG
Charles Darwin? Meh, get back on the Beagle* and stick to evolution
Your partys long deceased, so Im delivering an after lively retribution
Your texting is great, hell lets say youre on a level all alone
But your^^ your key punches in the wrong spot, the pounds still on your phone
Sucking up kid? Saying good battle, but still remember, looks can be deceiving
Part of the Fab 4? And we can call you straight
...Your still the only 1 that has hopes of believing
This shit was genious you have fuckin personal follwing punches multies mixed wit personals i like how you put together this verse regency
nice drop bra
Vote regency he verse was alot of personals and punches that were direct
My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
cool
vs
You cant break no one in, your already the one in your box
I told him his love is ticking away and he needs flavor
..So he went out and bought clocks
ha...ok
vote charles liked his verse more more punches n personals had better concepts reg had all the shit i've seen before so i gotta give it to charles iight no hate don need to elevate juss get better shit
vote//charles
Finishing strong, yo why even try, when the real one died at 73*
Posers need to be killed, and this ones overdue @ 100
....... .. ..but hes succumbed to me
vs
nothin...
v//reg
weak battle i feel yall coulda came a bit harder and reg had more punchees
Vote DQed...wack.
-Fue
R.
quotable-My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
loved it nice rest verse good but was feelin it
C.
quotable-My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
opener was nice rest of verse meh seen u drop harder b4 but i enjoyed it
overall-regency i liked ya verse was feelin it seems like u did this b4 i was feelin ya verse punchs was stretched and kinda stressed but u connected nicely and in the end dope verse charles u had a few lines i liked but i felt u slacked and let this one get away from u and i thought u might have had it but i re read the verses and u got beat no hate elevate and stop comein easy....
v// Regancy
reasons above
no hate to either
iight not a bad battle.....both had pretty good punches.....nice structure good flow to em....Charles.....ya opener was ya best lines..you fell off a bit in the middle of ya verseive seen better with ur whittiness too......but i think Regancy got this because of his personals against his opponent..........thats a pretty good personal to me.....thats why REG gets my votes better creativity against his opponent....Quote:
Finishing strong, yo why even try, when the real one died at 73*
Posers need to be killed, and this ones overdue @ 100
....... .. ..but hes succumbed to me
no hate both did good....
Vote - Charles
Bother verseud were meh', i've seen better from charles. Regency, i can tell you had the mechanics down-packed, but ur set-ups were horrible man. Charles took this for better mechanics and consistency. No hate to neither.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310650
Honest vote^^
Peace.
v/ regency.....good structure,...and over all better punches.....no-hate.......p-e-a-c-e.......
.. -spader
Vote DQed...wack.
-Fue .
Charles Darwin-
My synapsis of a rapper simply dont involve a herb like you
Snatch you out ya fuckin soul n I aint talkin about ya shoes
lol
dude, my hands move so fast when i punch u'd think i got parkisans
Knock the salayva out ya mouth and watch u stiffin ^ like a dead carcuses
meh
Punches hit so hard u cant hold ya tongue, i fucked ^ ya salavary glands
Unlike u I'm a "Heavy Hitta" whose real thoro, u should compliment my hands
naw
So stop the silliness man, your just the J in IJL, and that about it
We read your battle for entertainment, watchin u change ^ like scyts.
naw
N this herb meant to put Regent 4 his name, dumb ass kiss my tush
N I'm not a republican so tell ya girl to shave cuz I'wn beat around the Bush
LMAO
Regency-
Charles Darwin? Meh, get back on the Beagle* and stick to evolution
Your partys long deceased, so Im delivering an after lively retribution
meh
Your texting is great, hell lets say youre on a level all alone
But your^^ your key punches in the wrong spot, the pounds still on your phone
lol
Sucking up kid? Saying good battle, but still remember, looks can be deceiving
Part of the Fab 4? And we can call you straight
...Your still the only 1 that has hopes of believing
naw
Quote:
Originally Posted by Charles Darwin
set one for us, help break ya in.
You cant break no one in, your already the one in your box
I told him his love is ticking away and he needs flavor
..So he went out and bought clocks
nice
Finishing strong, yo why even try, when the real one died at 73*
Posers need to be killed, and this ones overdue @ 100
....... .. ..but hes succumbed to me
naw
ight close battle.....both came to battle but i'ma give it to charles on a edge....felt that he came a lil bitch stronger
v/Charles
ps both hit up one of the battles in my sig...thanx