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Pretty decent drop here, Coulda been better. Once you work on your syllabes and rhyme scheme you'll be more of a well rounded writer. But aside from that the structure was nice and the story was pretty good aswell, Keep it up fam. Peace Easy
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unatainable to the norm, far above decadence
a prisoner trapped in a single simple sentence
a mask needs worn, and old freindships torn,
who do you have to appease to shape your form
it's an everlasting battle between the masses
fighting for rights they never see without glasses
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nice drop fam, was consistent the whole way thru, the flow was on point, and i just liked it. somein a lil different you know, keep away from droppin shit the same as er body else or somein that may relate to what the next man did u feel me. Good piece right here and keep droppin em man.
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Brix, This Is Been Open Long Enough, Close Down Shop On It