this isn't complete? I thought I didn't ENTIRELY follow what you were talking about and that could be why. I can't see what you'd add to it tho.. the acrostic format might limit what you can add. the acrostic element to this was exceptionally well done btw.. I've read a few people try and do that on the net and it usually comes across as mad forced.. but this wasn't the case with yours. I liked your 'transitions' in this.. the ends of previous lines always connected & flowed well into the next. your use of multi's was also rather effective. I'm not generally one to read your drops, but I found this to be an enjoyable read.Quote:
Originally Posted by D.H.Brixton
^ this was my favourite part.. made me chuckle a bit.. which I guess makes me a little twisted but wtvr. I can already see that your ganna have a shit loada feeds to return but if you can get to Ms. Contralto I'd appreciate it. that would involve ignoring the herbish impression my user name leaves lol. thnx for the read dude.Quote:
Equipped w/ voltron might I thunder cat this puss in boots
to expose her pink panther by means of a lil cutting loose
and bag this trick to purr fection like my name was Felix
as I whistle looney tunes drenched in HER double helix
