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yeah for sure this had its qualities as well. imagery was ACE........ pace n flow was constant. i still say elevate on the rhyme capacity tho f'sho. tho working in a basic poetic sense here, the scheme of things inside and out has room to buck wild thus thrusting the flow forward more. outside basic exact sounding/ looking rhymes can work but perhaps work better w/ a coup[le other rhyme branches in between bars...
nice wording on these last 2 couple joints i read so yeah.
stay 1
hit this wen u can
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=307199
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Thanks man, i'll check out the linkage as soon as possible no doubt.
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Cool peice man! I liked this one not better than the last one I read but still Pak you did good here,imagery is on point once agian you actually did a bit better job on creativiy here than the last one I read thats about it everything else is atmost about equivilant to the other piece wait correction your multis here are much better ,as usually good concept quality lines as well as the pictures to go with the topic very well planned though out brained stormed w/e you wanna call it just keep dropping those dope OM's Pak!
