K and Nahlidge - An Apple Never Falls Too Far From The Tree.

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Originally Posted by Soulstice

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sorry, but it has no feed yet..

This was cool. Nahlidge clearly outshined K on this one. From the looks of it, he wrote 90% of the piece, lol. Anyway, I liked the story a lot, and I felt a lot of lines in Nah's verse moreso in K's. Both of your styles didn't mesh that well together, like it was supposed to in order to formulate a well-written collaboration. Nah is more straightforward, audio friendly, while K is more poetically drawn. You can actually see that when K's part comes up and the progression of the story kind of stops as I tried to adjust to the different variation of style in the storyline. Either way, this was pretty enjoyable. K, as your part progressed it got considerably better. Flow was iffy at parts, but you picked it up at the end. You can tell you haven't written in awhile. All in all, this was pretty good fellas. Pz.

cheers nique yeah i no im rusty as fuck and our styles clashed abit but word i may get back to writting.