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I knew someone was going to get this topic, and I'm glad it was you. I loved this piece. Even though Prince and Hendrix were before my time, I still understand the presence they gave off. Your rhymescheme definatly wasn't forced, and came off well with the flow. The part I liked the most was:
"Just to sip a spoonful of sight, before LSD took a bite
& euphoria became an addict, to Jimi's cool looking life.
Now I'm a fool stuck in spite, or heaven, or limbo..
Walking for a 7/11 to find, a missing sign in the window,
& with that said, you'll never know which way the wind'll go.
Praying for soul in a cracked bed.. to the children, and to God
I nod, and whisper softly with a cocked head..
What a life, right?"
In my opinion, that way VERY well thought out. You grasped ever aspect you needed to on this piece. I loved it. Not quite Hall Of Fame material, maybe if it was longer. But this will definatly be a piece I read again in like.. a few days. Nice job brix. Oh, and nice modding by the way. Keep writing.
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agh i see you wrote to the 1 bounce did too
ha
Who am I? Apart from the god of rock..
A black warlock finger tapping like "the mod' of shock".
Shredding, is what I've got, Till I run a mock at your wedding
Blaring out the speakers to your uncle's air that he's getting.
& while he dreams, I'm sweating, under the seems
Headband dressings, soaks up cheers from thundered teens.
that was all real dope......... constant flow n fluency. and delivered with impact
Jimi's spitting muck? Take a look at minions of music come up
For I am the Devil, and I'm breeding my pups..
^thats bordering on mental sickness. i been waiting for you to drop a few sic 1's within your pieces...............disturbaces and shit.ha
But I'd still rather be jamming the experience..
..every tuneful night.
Just to sip a spoonful of sight, before LSD took a bite
& euphoria became an addict, to Jimi's cool looking life.
^yeah ole jimboy was fucked up on sum shit f'real. played cool strings on it tho ha....
Walking for a 7/11 to find, a missing sign in the window,
& with that said, you'll never know which way the wind'll go.
Praying for soul in a cracked bed.. to the children, and to God
I nod, and whisper softly with a cocked head..
What a life, right?
yeah coo. had some real ill desciptions throughout the joint. was mos def entertaining.flow was kept illoy throughout. some nice multies in n out the lines. was all in all compacted very well into a neat package.
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yo read this if it aint too much trouble-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=307199
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Thanks. I'll get to your piece asap Vortex.
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Yeh Brix!
boutros boutros gali ass whore
This was cool man, i liked how the title was answered in the writing
Started off shaky for the first 8 bars or so
after that though i got into this and could feel the appreciation for Jimi
'Now the gate to hell isn't easily shut, we replace blood with ink
Reproducing, the likes of Kravitz and Prince.
We're holding links, but touching me? Never a moment since..
My golden glints, has ANYBODY matched my stolen prints.
See I'm still "Roland" mint, and with my axe to attack the stage
I can rip any script or act that you've played.
The facts & truths these days, portray my 28 years of life
To be youthful, right?
But I'd still rather be jamming the experience..
..every tuneful night.
Just to sip a spoonful of sight, before LSD took a bite
& euphoria became an addict, to Jimi's cool looking life.
Now I'm a fool stuck in spite, or heaven, or limbo..
Walking for a 7/11 to find, a missing sign in the window,
& with that said, you'll never know which way the wind'll go.
Praying for soul in a cracked bed.. to the children, and to God
I nod, and whisper softly with a cocked head..
What a life, right?
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Jimi, music'd be a better place if you were not dead.
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i was liking nearly all that shit, the spoonful of sight, ill
Great tribute man
