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This bitch flow with his rep, im get'n open in threads
Aint gotta piss on ya dome to show Urine over your head
(alrite wordplay but seen it befor)
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Ya hits aint known to be read, i'll spit a verse at this newbie
And he'll continue to drop shit, til i'm immersed in the dookie
(na)
Not impressed by your counts, post or drops as i mentor glory
Blow your biography out the building N' put an end to your story
(alrite)
Be honest, admit that your raps, are more then miss'n the gasps
Shit ya lines so long, but we kno your overly addicted to crack
(na)
Look we homies in all but see, your pretty drynched N pathetic
Shit let'n ya nuts hang the close's you'll lynched a schizophrnic
(mehhh)
Squat and take your piss, i'll get a vote, watch'em make a fit
Drop ya basic shit, it won't amount to nuffin ya consitpated Kid
(palyed concept)
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I should kick your ass, but first I have to book a flight
Now watch how I turn it up...
on this chamillionaire look a like.*
(more of a statment than anything)
Your crew say No herb's.. well shit, let me down son.
But wait a minute..
Dammit! I found one^
(na)
Yep.. you do suck donky dick..this battle youll get booted
Your verse is pretty nice...
with punche's NOT included
(Played concept)
Fucked up with this.. Your a newb and weak you dig?
looked for personal's, but cant talk about a life you dont live
(mehhh)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Xtreme Malice
Kid Sick huh my homie....*sniff* *sniff* hmmm....actually smells pretty good
You use to that smell huh? You like getting gang raped
But yea we homie's and you dope..
Shit! cant even type it with a str8 face
(not harsh at all)
haha, it's an addiction.. it's just another herb i'm rippin
wack text drop after text drop...
you can start your own monthly subscription
(again not harsh)
before i start with the closer, i would like to apoligize to the voters
sorry you have to read his shit, i should have made the line limit lower
(na no punchlines here honestly)
xtreme suck's ass..so does his crew, and I think we all would agree
that NOBODY would read your verse if it wasnt for me
(statmentish)
I voted honestly cause both of ya is str8 to me but hit up links in sig since i helped ya out....but imma o with XM for this battle...no hate
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Tecu you didn't poll your vote....and uppin and drop links
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This man claims that he flows, but god damn you weak yo
Pussy prolly get pissed on purspose to use his PMs........
...............................To plan ways to scheme votes
I said it you ready bitch, cuz im tired of state'n this
If schools over why the fuck is this Kid still playin sick?
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before i start with the closer, i would like to apoligize to the voters
sorry you have to read his shit, i should have made the line limit lower
xtreme suck's ass..so does his crew, and I think we all would agree
that NOBODY would read your verse if it wasnt for me
ok this was a kinda close battle.
kid- verse was pretty good. had some nice lines
but the best quotable lines are above. good flow
alright structure. rhymes were good overall a pretty
good verse
malice- also pretty good verse. you also had nice lines
but i think kid had more quotables. you had better flow
and perfect strucutre. overall you had a pretty good verse
v/kid in conclusion on having a better verse.
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Kid had the whole verse, the personals and the punches, I'm glad to see some of us havent lost our touch.
XM, well ur a different story, i thought u were better, but u let Kid overlap u son...u have a medicore verse here, u had a few of both but not well enuff.
V/Kid.
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up numba 5 and asperse...you kno thas consider'd swaying and crew voting right?
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I said it you ready bitch, cuz im tired of state'n this
If schools over why the fuck is this Kid still playin sick?
nice personal/nameplay, not played like most of em on kid
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before i start with the closer, i would like to apoligize to the voters
sorry you have to read his shit, i should have made the line limit lower
xtreme suck's ass..so does his crew, and I think we all would agree
that NOBODY would read your verse if it wasnt for me
lmao, nice punches
well i got 1 good bar from XM & 2 good bars from kid, so ima go wit kid for more consistancy, harder hittin punches, & jus a more enjoyable verse, no hate, keep up
v//kid sick
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im new, dunno wtf to say on this. eh voting kid sick. im a man on flow, both of u's had dope flow, every line was written with correct bar structure. but i liked some of kids lines, like xtreme could hav delivered better, constipated kid wtf??? neway was 1st battle i read from ere so it was good, in comparison to where i come from wit txt.
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This bitch flow with his rep, im get'n open in threads
Aint gotta piss on ya dome to show Urine over your head
I said it you ready bitch, cuz im tired of state'n this
If schools over why the fuck is this Kid still playin sick?
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You use to that smell huh? You like getting gang raped
But yea we homie's and you dope..
Shit! cant even type it with a str8 face
vote: Xtreme Malice
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kid...you had a good verse...nice complex punches..and good multies and mettas...yout flow fell of in some places but you still came strong...your first bar was a good one to start out on..then you came with a second one to help it..the rest that followed was good as well
my favorite bar of yours:
Your crew say No herb's.. well shit, let me down son.
But wait a minute..
Dammit! I found one^
lmao..made me laugh
XM..your shit was well written as well nice flow and punches..decent mettas and multies tho..your vocab wasnt as good as it always is....but you were creative enough to fix it so that it will fit perfectly...this was a well tohught out verse..and this was a close battle
my favorite bar of your:
This man claims that he flows, but god damn you weak yo
Pussy prolly get pissed on purspose to use his PMs........
...............................To plan ways to scheme votes
good punch..lol nice..it also made me laugh
v.kid
by a hair,this was a close battle fa real tho...
i vote fair..and i felt kid got this one
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I said it you ready bitch, cuz im tired of state'n this
If schools over why the fuck is this Kid still playin sick?
I have to say this was decent at best.
I've saw better verse's from you Malice but you had some flipped/played line's in your verser here. Decent verse just thought you could have out forth ALOT more effort.
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before i start with the closer, i would like to apoligize to the voters
sorry you have to read his shit, i should have made the line limit lower
Lol.. Could have had better wordin'.
xtreme suck's ass..so does his crew, and I think we all would agree
that NOBODY would read your verse if it wasnt for me
Meh.. Decent.
Another verse that was decent but not above par. I thought both of you lacked wordin' & harsher punche's. Both could have done better if they came alot more direct with harsher, more effective punche's.
V - Kid Sick.
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I said it you ready bitch, cuz im tired of state'n this
If schools over why the fuck is this Kid still playin sick?
vs
before i start with the closer, i would like to apoligize to the voters
sorry you have to read his shit, i should have made the line limit lower
xtreme suck's ass..so does his crew, and I think we all would agree
that NOBODY would read your verse if it wasnt for me
v/kid
