I read this on my alias. Nice peaice you got here. The wordplay was nice. leado onto that flow which was good as well. I though that the structre was normal. Basic which some readers find well to do. The creativty and imagenary was nice. Nothing horribel or special. This story plot was well done as well as I would expect from you Scythe. I give this peice a 9-10. Keep up the great writing.
