that Franky dude is CamaracQuote:
Originally Posted by .Nique.
please check out the link I left
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that Franky dude is CamaracQuote:
Originally Posted by .Nique.
please check out the link I left
^Yea, I will.
And yea, I know.
Camarac=Baron.
Far from hating this, I did enjoy it. Like I said, the cadence and word choice is a strong point of yours, but the content in this was no-where near what you've done in other pieces, or the form you showed to win those two titles. I hold a huge respect for you Nique, I wouldnt hate ona piece just for the sake of it, I did actually enjoy the read BUT I figured a reply pointing out the negatives, from a fellow experienced writer, would help you far more than me quoting the same lines as everyone else and saying "Dope". Feel me?
Like I said in my initial post, take it as was intended. And furthermore- would someone who didnt enjoy the read take the time to write out a lengthy response like mine was, when they could simply of clicked 'back' and entered one of the hundreads of newbie pieces in here to hate on?! Think about it.
I am NOT a senseless hater, just tryna give you a little advice on what to work on. :^)