Writing

This was decent. I could tell you were experimenting with the structure.. which, although basic, has potential. You could have really worked on the flow of it though. There were plenty of parts where if you had just left a word out, it would have been perfect. Your imagery was nice.. With room to elevate. The subject matter was pretty dope. I know how you feel when it comes to writing. It's my release. Overall, this was a pretty decent piece.
7/10

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it was ok. The wordplay was ok. Not great but ok. The creatity was nice but work On imagenary. The story was good and the flow was well. The Rhyme skeme was ok but the imagenary was good. The peice itself was around a 7-10. Ok for a 3rd peice. Keep writing.

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this was a good piece wyte. excellent imagery n wordplay. it was a lil short. but u hade excellent multis. just work on ur vocab. if u had better vocab this would excellent just keep writin

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even though it wasnt as long as most i prefer quality to quantity and
this one had bunches of quality great form structure flow vocab and
creatvity nothing at all bad about this excpet i keep wanting more

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this was interesting...the imagery and vocab was very nice consistantly.....flow was good.....rhymes were good. multies were pretty good too. topic was interesting...i saw some creativity in this peice my fav. lines were:

I have my pad ready, & with the pen steady
Writers block already, now my pen is heavy
Writing thoughtful words, or destroying herbs
Its starts just as blurbs, now im connecting verbs

that was great, good rhymes and nice imagery^

keep it up this was a nice peice

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