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do i even have to break-it down line by line? naw man.....
fatal- ur verse was good u had some ok punches and personals, ur wording was a lil off but still u won..........6/10
JR- ur verse was meh....meh garbage, ur lines idk if they were even lines.......no punches nor perosnals......2/10
v/fatal
wordie^ this battle should not be broken down...it's clearly onesided
Fatal: you had some good concepts here and there but you need to be creative all throughout the verse and u had nice personals and a couple punches,but a bit were played but you are elevating good job here enogh to win I understand it wasn't your best dropping ability but you still came with a couple good lines w/ set ups
JR: well you need some elevattion but you seem to look like you're getting a handle on some ok concpets that aren't too played but you need better wordplay and punches as well as good personals but what is aonther thing is setting up your opponet so try reading LLL battles to get an idea on what to look for when you are thinking of your punches as well as personals and wordplay
V/Fatal...Better Punches/Concepts