WV? What bout it?
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WV? What bout it?
this was a decent piece liked the idea of it the darkside of things really worked out here this piece could of used more iternal rhymes and more emotion i felt the imagrey though which was good you started off good keeping me interested then it died out you should try to keep the reader hooked all the way through it to the end other then that good piece stay up
Omega aka Silent aka Kratos aka I make to many damn alias'.....LOL...hey man...anyways...nice drop....some things could have been worded better...but this had a lot of emotion in it...scary picture LOL...you described it well with your words in the beginning though...I don't like the topic personally...but it was nice read nonetheless...good job!
(now hit my OM...Divine Intervention)
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