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This piece came together very well. I've never seen Wireless write like this before. but I have to say I enjoyed it a lot. You both flowed extremely well, staying on point the whole time and not throwing in random words to make it flow good. I liked both of your metaphorical useage in this piece which got me really involved. The emotion was definantly there and the imagery was great. I like how you structured everything out and how it all came together like a unibrow. This was a very relevant and interesting piece. Keep em coming.
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Man, this was a very good well written and thought out piece, the communication between yall to on writting this piece must have been strong, your vocab was nice dont think i saw any spelling mistakes, flow was on the okay side, this was a good way to to describe the history of this attack, it had alot of desciption, alot of detail, wonderfull imagery, and just well thought out. Reading this piece make me think yall have been writing must of your life. But keep this up, yall are doing good with your collabs
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