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umm will your topic choice i didn't like its kinda played out an you took the same spin on it..line length wise it was kinda stretched for me and everyone else i think but you had some multies in their and shit just should wrote on a better topic and such no hate and shit
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this piece wasnt your greatest but it seemed like you put this together in about 10 minutes...your lines were a little stretched which made it hard for me to follow the flow...no real creative concept...just self-glorification...ummm overall i wasnt really wowed with this piece...it was just a simplistic drop for the most part...overall it was okay...rtf plzz...links in sig.
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yo this shit droped like what eill cha say ye good, the flow was aiight ure multies were aiight, like the way u put the words tagether man, fuckin keep it up aiight.
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