Keyed vs. Gho$t

Keyed you suck in FL. . . . . . . .honistly i've never seen worse,
n' biting the LLL is the only way you'll have a $pitacular verse.
rofl nice
my punches hit hard dude. . . . . .i wont stop till your bleading,
people dont sleep on your battles, they doze off while reading.
Played
i got this battle on lock, you dont stand a chance your through,
fucka key, i'll only use 'im when im half assing against noobs.
roflmao great wordlay noobs/nobs
i'ma beat yo ass down for a change, i thought you'd had enough,
coz its sad how evin the wackest of RB... can beat yo ass up.
Nah weak
i'ma chop you dude, this battle is setting youself up for a fall,
coz P.Skills are best shown' off. . . . . . . .in the fucking urinal.
Meh

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This is a fight bytch, watch yaself for any openings dude
If battlin you'll shut you up...shit I'd vote for me too
Gramatical errors made it hard to comprehend
For someone garbage you must ghost write bytch
`N I guess I could half ass...to get yours off my dick
These half assed punches are played but funny
You're no rapper, a whack fuckin text head, I write, you're worse
See, I found a problem in half assing...I can't bite your verse!!!
Umm you wanna bite his verse?
^^Those lines `n your done, the rest I can key, read kid
`Cuz ain't nuttin new about you...`cept maybe where you live
Good use of location
You're an average FLer, cannot get up too me dude understand
I'll beat you easy, make you feel like you are down under man
Nah

Keyed your my homie dawg but GW edged it outz

[5]

Keyed you suck in FL. . . . . . . .honistly i've never seen worse,
n' biting the LLL is the only way you'll have a $pitacular verse.
Dont know if this a fact or fiction, punch was worded well enough though
my punches hit hard dude. . . . . .i wont stop till your bleading,
people dont sleep on your battles, they doze off while reading.
old concept, didn't come off fresh
i got this battle on lock, you dont stand a chance your through,
fucka key, i'll only use 'im when im half assing against noobs.
wording here ^^was really off, decent concept
i'ma beat yo ass down for a change, i thought you'd had enough,
coz its sad how evin the wackest of RB... can beat yo ass up.
more of a claim, didnt feel this
i'ma chop you dude, this battle is setting youself up for a fall,
coz P.Skills are best shown' off. . . . . . . .in the fucking urinal.
heh weak wordplay, softy ender

This is a fight bytch, watch yaself for any openings dude
If battlin you'll shut you up...shit I'd vote for me too
below avg at best, liked the idea
For someone garbage you must ghost write bytch
`N I guess I could half ass...to get yours off my dick
heh, not bad
You're no rapper, a whack fuckin text head, I write, you're worse
See, I found a problem in half assing...I can't bite your verse!!!
yeah this was ok, straight diss
^^Those lines `n your done, the rest I can key, read kid
`Cuz ain't nuttin new about you...`cept maybe where you live
nice
You're an average FLer, cannot get up too me dude understand
I'll beat you easy, make you feel like you are down under man
coulda set this up differently, wasnt feeling it

Ghost
Came with either played or non effective punches.

Key
1 or 2 ok punches, & dropped the punch of the battle with that 'new' line.

v/Key clearly the better of the two.

Quote:

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Keyed you suck in FL. . . . . . . .honistly i've never seen worse,
n' biting the LLL is the only way you'll have a $pitacular verse.
Dont know if this a fact or fiction, punch *was worded well enough though

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*wasnt....

Keyed you suck in FL. . . . . . . .honistly i've never seen worse,
n' biting the LLL is the only way you'll have a $pitacular verse.

this could have been something, but worded badly

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You're no rapper, a whack fuckin text head, I write, you're worse
See, I found a problem in half assing...I can't bite your verse!!!
^^Those lines `n your done, the rest I can key, read kid
`Cuz ain't nuttin new about you...`cept maybe where you live

this battle was meh n weak keyed came with some bad puches but the 1's that were quoted is the 1's that basicly won him the battle, ghost came shit, there was nothing real good in ur verse, there were punches that need better wording, so work on that n' coming harder with good punches, but key won this won

V/keyed

Upp #2..

Upp #3..

Ghost

Keyed you suck in FL. . . . . . . .honistly i've never seen worse,
n' biting the LLL is the only way you'll have a $pitacular verse.
it's ait 6/10
my punches hit hard dude. . . . . .i wont stop till your bleading,
people dont sleep on your battles, they doze off while reading.
fiya 8/10
i got this battle on lock, you dont stand a chance your through,
fucka key, i'll only use 'im when im half assing against noobs.
. . .. no 3/10
i'ma beat yo ass down for a change, i thought you'd had enough,
coz its sad how evin the wackest of RB... can beat yo ass up.
nope 3/10
i'ma chop you dude, this battle is setting youself up for a fall,
coz P.Skills are best shown' off. . . . . . . .in the fucking urinal.
that dosen't rhyme, don't mispronounce! 2/10
Total 22/50

Keyed

This is a fight bytch, watch yaself for any openings dude
If battlin you'll shut you up...shit I'd vote for me too
hot, 8/10
For someone garbage you must ghost write bytch
`N I guess I could half ass...to get yours off my dick
just as hot 8/10
You're no rapper, a whack fuckin text head, I write, you're worse
See, I found a problem in half assing...I can't bite your verse!!!
nah 5/10
^^Those lines `n your done, the rest I can key, read kid
`Cuz ain't nuttin new about you...`cept maybe where you live
oooo, nice 7/10
You're an average FLer, cannot get up too me dude understand
I'll beat you easy, make you feel like you are down under man
it's ait 6/10
Total 34/50

My Vote: Keyed

lolz @ this ish............................................... ........................................

EsQ
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Keyed you suck in FL. . . . . . . .honistly i've never seen worse,
n' biting the LLL is the only way you'll have a $pitacular verse.

basic.

my punches hit hard dude. . . . . .i wont stop till your bleading,
people dont sleep on your battles, they doze off while reading.

Bleh, ok i guess, still basic.

i got this battle on lock, you dont stand a chance your through,
fucka key, i'll only use 'im when im half assing against noobs.

wording completely off in the second line. weak too, no punch.

i'ma beat yo ass down for a change, i thought you'd had enough,
coz its sad how evin the wackest of RB... can beat yo ass up.

Best line so far in your verse.

i'ma chop you dude, this battle is setting youself up for a fall,
coz P.Skills are best shown' off. . . . . . . .in the fucking urinal.

Decent.

Overall : Basic verse, needs some umfh, need to incorporate some hard punches in there.

This is a fight bytch, watch yaself for any openings dude
If battlin you'll shut you up...shit I'd vote for me too

Witty.

For someone garbage you must ghost write bytch
`N I guess I could half ass...to get yours off my dick

Decent, but humour was definately there.

You're no rapper, a whack fuckin text head, I write, you're worse
See, I found a problem in half assing...I can't bite your verse!!!

Weak, imo.

^^Those lines `n your done, the rest I can key, read kid
`Cuz ain't nuttin new about you...`cept maybe where you live
oooo,

Decent.

You're an average FLer, cannot get up too me dude understand
I'll beat you easy, make you feel like you are down under man

Wack.

Overall : Your verse was a little better, had better lines, wasnt so basic, had funny and witty punches.

Overall : Keyed, had the punches and style over EsQ.

Take It Or Leave It.