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surprisingly i loved this. the conscience following each line from the rapist was pretty dope. you portrayed it like the rapist was being forced to do this kind of shit by some unknown sinfull force, which was kind've cool to me, simply because i've never seen it written that way. the internals and flow were a BIT choppy at times, but they were still really good for you two. you could sense the difference in skill as well. the red lines seemed a bit less intricate with rhyming and more onto the point, while the black writing was just going off on that vocab usage, sometimes too much. it was a cool piece nontheless though, keep working at it guys. not your best ta2_tears, but deffinatly NY's best.
- Nash
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thnx for that feed McNashty, LOl, but ayo get on aim
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you're not even on it :bored:
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yes i am, im bout to checc if ur on
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so ye... thanks 4 da feed everybody, not my best performance but still didnt turn out 2 bad
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hmmm..this was tight ma nigga'z
i felt like a little DMX damien type shit going on
but ya too pulled it off..great use of imagery & emotions
it had a good story line and it stood on point thru out da whole OM
dis was real good...ima keep ma eye open for ya two workin 2gether again
~1~
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thnx homie, and yea keep ur eye's open, we got more comin' together
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lol and holla ma nigga..NEW YORK iz coming back fo'sho
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[i] Hey, I have to admit, this was real thought out and the result is this $hit is tight...it resembles the DMX joint with Damien, but the wordplay and structure was top-notched. I feel the both of you elevated a bit more, regardless of what your current status is considered. Multi's were decent as well...Overall, I have to give this an A.
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Ayo Thnx For That, And Will Get Bacc
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yo liked this one man the topic was good and you brought some originality to it really liked that saw a lot of good vocab in there some big words esepecilly in the beggining ya wordplay couldn't have been better that and the flow went perfectly along with the peice great job wit that ya structure was also great it was set up as neatly as possible and my favorite thing in this was the imagery came dope as hell with that some of those lines were like illistrations so great peice stay up
leave feed on my om pureness
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this was a pretty clever piece. i thought you had some pretty funny lines but it was different. you did a good job with this because you had some very creative rhymes. your flow was a lil fucked in some places but it was solid throughout.
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