the drop was hot....it was deep..it made me think.....
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the drop was hot....it was deep..it made me think.....
it was a pretty good read it was nice and deep, u gave it meaning i liked it was worth my time, had good flow and lyrics and structure was pretty good , keep on working on the lines and ull be even better
^glad you liked
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it was good man. your lyrics in ya first verse was very complex in good way. kinda like the same style Prodigy of Mobb Deep uses. like that first verse and the rest of the piece was creative.
"Speak my name, no more jokes – matter fact fuck a title
Touch no bible with no hands to God – hoping with luck the sky will
Open to destruct what I will – but religion’s run amuck with idols
Incisions that’ll touch the vital – my visions of such recitals
I admit that I look up to rivals and suffer trifles
knowing that as such my child will
Have a better life to lead – mind still travels at hyper speeds
Death concurs and conquers when life agrees to lie in peace
Yet strife impedes and gripes increase, inner hatred becomes a silent beast
Violent beef inside you creeps and steals thoughts like a strident thief"
damn, that was an old up ledge
up up and away
crash!!!